Introducing The
Beatles?
Lightning flashed.
Thunder didn’t.
Rain did whatever it is rain does. Not pelted but more of a thump.
The rain heavy, like that big drum,
the tympani, in the orchestra.
Corey held the Beatles album in his hand, staring at the
cover. There was a slight shadow to the George
Harrison’s right. Or was there?
Lightning flashed. He saw the shadow. Thump.
Thump. Thump went his heart and the rain. The first raindrops always toughest,
the heavy armor of the thunderstorm, the ones that couldn’t hang in the clouds
anymore, opening rips in the vapor for lighter, flightier drops to follow after,
The lightning ended. His eyes unadjusted, left the room dark. He felt the plastic sleeve that held the
record album in his hands, protecting it from the sweat. It was the last thing he had from the estate. Selling this would mean that everything was
memories.
“It’s not like I’ll
never hear a Beatles’ song again,” he said to himself.
Thunder did its thing without lightning ahead of it.
But he wouldn’t hear the Beatles’ songs the way he’d heard
them first, not ever again, if he sold this.
Coming from the big speakers of the hi-fi, Dad and Mom dancing, him sitting on
the edge of the couch watching them laugh.
Lightning flashed.
Handwritten on the cardboard sleeve: First dance, side A, song one.
Corey opened the plastic, took the record out, spun it on
his finger. “Well, she was just seventeen…” he whispered.
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13 comments:
Nice story! As a Sixties lover, I really liked your take on it.
Hey, that was really nice!
Oh man, I miss records.
Sad and sweet.
Any story with a Beatles theme is already off to a good start. Nice work! :)
Great story. It's kind of sad and bittersweet and comes from a place of nostalgia. Wow. You are an awesome writer Briane.
LOVE the Beatles reference and the note at the end. Touching
So bittersweet. loved it!
Flash fiction AND The Beatles--it's a win-win!
Times must be desperate if he's selling his Beatles album! :( Love the emotions in your post.
Nice flash! I was drwan in by your character and his musings.
Wonderful piece. I love how you used the lightning and thunder almost musically against the storyline.
I'll announce the finalists tomorrow.
That was awesome. I loved it. It drew so much feeling from the reader.
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